Describe Your Home Tools
Instructions:
List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5
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Today is July 24,2009. The weather is bad here in São Paulo, Brazil. It's raining and it's very cold. Tomorrow will be a similar weather conditions. I have a beautiful friend from Philippines who told me that she likes cold days. I think she is a little crazy.
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very good
perfeito, parabéns
Very good. You put te word to the right place.
Just a couple of points...this is more correct English...
Tomorrow will be similar weather conditions. OR
Tomorrow will be 'a' similar weather condition.
English is very difficult, so good luck my friend!
very good my friend!!
Awesome writing, Roberto! Just remove "a" before "similar". Or, you could say, "Tomorrow will have similar weather conditions."
By the way, it has been cool and rainy here in Virginia. The weekend looks hot, though!
Keep up the good work!
Nate
very good, you could say
Tomorrow there will be similar weather conditions.
I have a beautiful friend from the Philippines.
(:
Hope I could help!