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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 1

Describe the location of your city and country

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the locations of your city and country. Which countries are located north, south, east, and west of your country? In which corner of the country is your city located? Describe which cities are located north, south, east, or west of your city.

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My name is Laureen! I'm 18 years old and from Dortmund in Germany. I go to a business school and i hope to finish it next year. After school I want to study business at university because I'd like to work in an import or export company. That's the reason why I need to improve my French and my English. Also I'm very interested in other cultures and countries and I think it's good to speak a lot of languages.
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  • ABHIJIT
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    sehr nett.
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  • Benoit
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    Très bon!

    Everything seems perfect!

     
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  • Sunshine
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    So far so good...
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  • Joshua
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    Also, I'm very interested in other cultures and countries...
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  • Donny K
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    Dortmund,in Germany

    i hope to finish it next year

    at the university
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  • surendra
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    Dear Laureen, i hope to finish...... In this sentence "i"  is wrong, you should write "I" at the place of "i".         Suren   

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  • GTaveira
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    everyone else already pointed out some little corrections. Overall it is very well written!
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  • hanan
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    Exellent introduction

    I hope i can write in german as good as u are.

    good luck
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  • DANIEL DAVID UF...
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    Mein schazt dein Englisch ist gut aber du must nachst ma gliechen dies schreiben

    I ATTENDING A  BUSINESSS SCHOOL BECAUSE I DID LIKE TO WORK WITH und nicht IN AN IMPORT AND EXPROT COMPANY...aber firm ist besser mein liebe
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