Describe your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from the lessons, describe your trip to work or school. How long does it take to get there? How far do you have to go? How much does it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 3
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I have a small family. I live together with my parents and thank god that i've only one brother! :P He's 16 years old and younger than me. Sometimes he's nice, but he can be very annoying too.
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Your writing is perfect.
You could also say :
thank god that I only have one brother.
I think that both forms are acceptable though.
Sehr gut!
Perfect...
very good :D
good work done dear..keep it up.
Super
We live together (not i live together)
If u need any help with your english please dont hesitate to add me as your friend
good luck
Mein Schatzt gut schreibung.....dein korregerien..
HE IS NICE BUT COULD SOMETIMES BE ANNOYING oder du kannst SOMETIME GET ON ONES NERVES.....
ICH GEBE DIR 90 prozent
We live together (weil du redest ueber zwei Personen beispiel, wir leben zusammen)
and thank God,
God is a proper noun, and needs to be capitalized.
Lauren, du machst aber sehr schoen
keep your practice up :-)