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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4

Describe an area in your city

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

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I have blond hair and blue eyes. I'm 1,72m and my weight is 59kg. My hair is shoulder-length and I'm very happy that I dont have facial hair. You can see me on my picture! :)
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  • wind21
    Mochapoints: 15533  |  Teacher Score: 3151 (89%)

    1,75m high...

    don't have
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  • Evandro Valença
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    That's a great description girl...

    good job...

    x.o.x.o.
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  • Edward Delfino
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    I have blond hair and blue eyes. I'm 1,72m and my weight is 59kg. My hair is shoulder-length and I'm very happy that I don't have facial hair. You can see me on in my picture!

    Almost perfect!!!
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  • Sunshine
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    59kg --> 59kgs

    dont ---> don't

    on my picture --> in my picture

    But important thing is that you will be understood  mostly.

    You really have attractive face!!!

     
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  • Jess.
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    VERY G00D!
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  • Donny K
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    don't
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  • leoncio leon
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    perfect!!!! I think so!!:):):);)
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  • ABHIJIT
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    ok....sehr gut...some mistakes are corrected..
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  • vickychikki
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    nice work done and also your description is mindblowing dear..
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  • roxy
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    nice!!i liked it

     
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  • hanan
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    Great way to describ yourself.

    you forgot to say that you are very beautiful.I wish my daughter can be beautiful as you are.
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  • Branka
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    :)
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