Describing your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1
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My favorite drink is coffee. I like talking with my friends with coffee at a cafe. I can relax with it. and I order a cake. Sweet cake matchs a bitter coffee. :D
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Very good work!!
My favorite drink is coffee. I like talking with my friends with over coffee at a cafe. I can relax with it. and I I also like to order a cake. Sweet cake matchs a goes with bitter coffee. :D
For the first correction, it sounds awkward to say "talking with my friends with coffee," rather than to say "talking with my friends over coffee." I don't really know why.
Second, most of the time it looks strange when you write english to put "and" at the front of a sentence. I don't really know why for this one either, unfortunately.
Thirdly, in english it sounds strange to say "matches," rather than "goes with," or complements. Most of the time in english the verb "to match" means "to be the same as."
But it's not a bad paragraph otherwise. Good work!
My favourite drink is coffee.I like talking with my friends while having coffee at cafe.I can relax with it and can order a cake.sweet cake is a better combination with bitter coffee.
Good luck
Another of saying it:
My favorite drink is coffee. I like talking to my friends over a cup of coffee at a cafe. I can relax with it. Bitter coffee taste good with sweet cake, so I ordered one.
----Good work!
Got a "typo"
Another of saying it: ->>>Another way of saying it:
I like talking with my friends and having a coffee at a cafe. I can relax with it and I order a cake. Sweet cake is better with a bitter coffee. Suteki! Omedetou.
My favourite drink is coffee.I like talking to my friends and having a coffee at a cafe.I can relax with it and I order a cake.Sweet cake is better with bitter coffee.
you did very well!keep working!!;))