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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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A man is bald. He does not have hair.
A woman does not curly black hair. She have straigh blonde hair.
A girl does not short hair. She has long hair
A boy has blonde hair. he does not black hair.
You does not have straigh blonde hair. You has curly black hair.
I has blonde hair. I does not brown hair.
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  • cdaves2
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    curlystraight hair.not have blonde hair.I have shortI  do notYou do notYou  have

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