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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

Emy's submission: Average Rating:
When I go to a cafe, I usually order a cup of tea and sometimes a sandwich or cake.
I don't drink cofee very much, but I love fragrance of it, so I enjoy staying and reading books at cofee shop.
In Japan, many cafes has been created recently and many Japanese also enjoy cafe like bar after eating dinner.
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  • eviltwins
    Mochapoints: 8014  |  Teacher Score: 4934 (100%)

    Good job,

     

    so I enjoy staying and reading books at the coffee shop.

     

    In Japan, many cafes have (Plural dakara) been created recently and many Japanese also enjoys the cafe like a bar after eating dinner.

     

    Ganbatte kudasai~
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • lexandraum
    Mochapoints: 125  |  Teacher Score: 22 (0%)

    When I go to a cafe, I usually order a cup of tea and sometimes a sandwich or cake.

    I don't drink cofee very much, but I love (the) fragrance of it,

    so I enjoy staying and reading books at cofee shop.

    >> so i enjoy reading books at the cafe.

    In Japan, many cafes has been created recently and many Japanese also enjoy cafe like bar after eating dinner.

    >> In Japan , there are many new cafes and many Japanese also like to go to the cafe after dinner just like visiting a bar
    Submitted over a year ago
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