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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

Priscila's submission: Average Rating:
Jane is thrilled because will marry. She isn't worried with the preparations. My father has eyes blues and is strong. Jacob is a boy very low but he has a big heart. He doesn't likes to be called low. Mary is nice and very beautiful. But she doesn't know cooking. You are unique and good at what does, but aren't communicative. I'm happy with my life. Am funny and love jumping but hate heights.
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  • ralemao
    Mochapoints: 668  |  Teacher Score: 196

    * Jane is thrilled because she will marry.

    * My father has blue eyes and he is strong.

    * Jacob is a low boy but his heart is big.

    * He doesn't like to be called low.

    * You are unique and good in what you do, but communicative. (este "but" já está negando)

    * I'm funny and I love jump but I hate height.

    Acho q é isso, bom find

    Submitted over a year ago
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