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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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The day before yesterday was Monday and was cold and cloudy. I wore a scarf and a coat. Yesterday, August 2nd, was sunny! We wore sunglasses and short T-shirt. Today is cold and raining. Wherefore I'm wearing a scarf, an umbrella and a hat. It may rain tomorrow, but in the evening maybe the weather heat. So they will wear sunglasses and raincoast on the same day. On Thursday afternoon can't raining because I don't have a umbrella.

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  • Poliana
    Mochapoints: 766  |  Teacher Score: 214 (0%)

    If you have a vowel, always use AN (not a) before a word. For example: AN Umbrella.

    And it's Raincoat, Not RaincoaSt. :)

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  • Poliana
    Mochapoints: 766  |  Teacher Score: 214 (0%)

    If you have a vowel, always use AN (not a) before a word. For example: AN Umbrella.

    And it's Raincoat, Not RaincoaSt. :)

    Submitted over a year ago
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