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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 5

Famous Landmarks

Instructions: Where did you go on your last vacation? Did you see any famous landmarks? What other types of interesting sites did you see?

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I went to Dechun beach last weekend.
There are many jelifishes and people.
It was terrible holiday.
The Mud Festival that I expected was already overed.
:(
ah, And we went there by car.
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    I went to Dechun beach last weekend. There were are many jellyfish jelifishes and people there. It was a terrible holiday. The Mud Festival that I expected was already overed over. :( ah, And . We we went to Dechun Beach there by car.

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