Describe your street
Instructions:
Look outside of your window and describe the movement that is happening on your street. Which direction are the people and the cars moving? How would a guest reach your home from the street?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 2
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I would like to have some food in chinese resturant. It's behind the post office , and there is a book store across the street. there are many resturants are next to the chinese resturant but i just like this one.do you want to try it with me ?
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RichardMochapoints: 1135 | Teacher Score: 418Holly here is your lesson that I have corrected. I would like to eat Chinese food. The Chinese restaurant I like is located behind the post office. There is a book store across the street from it. There are many restaurants near this Chinese restaurant. I like to eat at this one. Do you want to join me? Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
wallyMochapoints: 10157 | Teacher Score: 8875 (98%)Very good. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
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keep it up Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
RobMochapoints: 2272 | Teacher Score: 950 (0%)Good! Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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