What are people doing?
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary from this lesson, describe the activities that six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and I. EX. The postman often pushes a cart in the morning.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 5
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The woman is closing the windows and closing the doors.
The man is closing the door of the car and left in the garage , then he will ride of bike in around of the pond.
That beautiful girl was closing the door of her house, because she was alone.
I see the boy pulling the cart with other boy to other place.
I see the woman held on the wall, then I was to talk with about many things.
The man is closing the door of the car and left in the garage , then he will ride of bike in around of the pond.
That beautiful girl was closing the door of her house, because she was alone.
I see the boy pulling the cart with other boy to other place.
I see the woman held on the wall, then I was to talk with about many things.
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The woman is closing the windows and closing the doors. (não é necessário repetir)
The man is closing the door of the car and leaving the garage , then he will ride on a bike in around of the pond. (Vc quis dizer que a porta era a da left ou usou left como passado de leave? Acredito que foi a segunda opção, por isso corrigi conforme tal.)
I see the boy pulling the cart with another boy, taking it to other place. (esta frase não faz muito sentido... o garoto está puxando uma carroça?)
I see the woman held on the wall, then I was going to talk with her about many things.