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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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my last vacation was in Anhui province，it ahout ten thousands kilometers far away.I spand over 1000 yuan for toll.
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  • kelin
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    Capitalize the first letter of the first word when writing a sentence. "My last vacation was in Anhui Province, it is about 10,000 KM away. I spent over 1000 yuan for the toll." 2 spaces after writing a sentence and beginning a new sentence. 1 space after a comma. Check this site out: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/index2.htm Good work..
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  • augusto 英国 ไทย
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    It is located about 10,000km far away. Are you sure about the distance? Please notice that 10,000km is enough to go from China to Europe
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  • Nebil
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    My last vacation was in Anhui province. It is about ten thousand kilometres away from my home. I spent over 1000 yuan for toll. Always leave a space after a full stop and don't forget to start with a capital letter at the begining of a sentence. Well done!! keep practicing.
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