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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 2

Describe your street

Instructions: Look outside of your window and describe the movement that is happening on your street. Which direction are the people and the cars moving? How would a guest reach your home from the street?

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My favourite restaurant is named Shuwang Casseroles. The staple food is mixian. It's very delicious and price is also very cheap. The opposite is supermarket. And the next door is another restrant.
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  • Jim Lang
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  • Jim Lang
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    Excellent, instead of saying "The opposite is supermarket" we would say "Opposite the supermarket is a restaurant".
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  • kelin
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    Very good lesson. "My favorite restaurant is named Shuwang Casseroles. The staple food is mixian. It is very delicious and the price is very cheap. Opposite of Shuwang Casseroles is a supermarket and next door is another restaurant."
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  • Nebil
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    My favorite restaurant is called Shuwang Casseroles. The main food is mixian. It's very delicious and the price is also very cheap. Opposite the restaurant is a supermarket and next door there is another restaurant. Very good!!
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