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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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the goa was my last place.....i dun know hw far away its frm my home....i dun know
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  • vinubha
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    hey shirly..u shouldn use THE in front of places!!it s just GOA and not THE GOA...
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  • Patricia R.
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     Goa was the last place I visited. I don't know how far it is from my home. I don't know. Good try Shirly! :0)
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  • Muhammad Faisal...
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    good work,keep in continuation,I think it increase your confidence lot of more take care your self Allah hafiz
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  • blueflame
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    I agree with Laura.
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