Running Errands
Instructions:
Write about a set of errands you have to do. Where do you need to go? When? With who?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 2
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i have to go to school with my friends.Today wearing white shirt and a yellow hat.I like wearing closet happy.
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Hello, Mic:)
Incorrect in general.
Errands means things which u have to do. Ex. I have to go shopping with my brother today. or Im going to dentist tommorrow with my younger sister. .....
Where is she ? At IN the shopping mall. I'm work in hospital. I'm and she IS getting money in the bank. (but better to say We are getting money) They are shopping in the mall.
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Im not sure that I have corrected all mistakes, but, maybe someone native helps u better.
Good luck:)
*I work in a hospital...
*She and I are getting money in the bank...
See you!!!
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