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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 5

Famous Landmarks

Instructions: Where did you go on your last vacation? Did you see any famous landmarks? What other types of interesting sites did you see?

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Last year we went to Holland on a vacation.We went by car.After that we went to visit Germany.

Πέρυσι πήγαμε στην Ολλανδία για μια vacation.We πήγε από car.After ότι πήγαμε να επισκεφθεί τη Γερμανία.
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  • klazien
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    Last year we went to Holland FOR a vacation. We went by car. THEREAFTER we went to visit Germany. Πέρυσι πήγαμε στην Ολλανδία για μια διακοπές. πήγε από αυτοκίνητο . έκτοτε πήγαμε να επισκεφθεί τη Γερμανία.
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  • nerminfgr
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    thanks klazien....
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  • Vuqar
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    Merhaba kardeshim! Interi bir azciq tamir etdik. :) tatil yapmak =to be on vacation (artikli kullanilmaz). qayet iyi! kendine iyi bak!
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  • nerminfgr
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    ευχαριστώ... thanks.
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  • giorgos
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    merhaba! do you speak greek too?
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  • giorgos
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    Πέρυσι πήγαμε στην Ολλανδία για διακοπές. Πήγαμε (we went) με αυτοκίνητο (car). Μετά πήγαμε να επισκευθούμε or επισκευθήκαμε τη Γερμανία.
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  • Gragra
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    Good Work. You could have said " After that we visited Germany. "
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    Last year, we went to Holland for a vacation (with my car or by car). (Then, Next, or After that), we went to visit to Germany. Finally, I got very happy at that time.
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  • maima.khan@yaho...
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    Good attempt
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  • rachel
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  • M
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    Hmm you did not request me but I feel that I should comment, since you are misleading by some people. We can say, we went "on" vacation, as you wrote its correct and we use "for"  with holiday as have you planned for your holiday.

    What kinda car do you have BTW?

     
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