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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4

Describe an area in your city

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

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My hair is blond and long. Many people say that my eyes are blue but for real my eyes are green. Usually i wear blue contact lenses. I dont have facial hair.
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  • Arslan
    Mochapoints: 18830  |  Teacher Score: 9476 (97%)

    ;) Nice ;)

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  • Giba
    Mochapoints: 3156  |  Teacher Score: 368 (0%)

    ...for real...  I don´t know if it is correct but normally the people write "in actual" or "actually"

    On the whole, the sentence is nice... good job

    Submitted over a year ago
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