Describe your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from the lessons, describe your trip to work or school. How long does it take to get there? How far do you have to go? How much does it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 3
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I have a big family. I live with my father and my mother. I think someone has a question in the mind which only three persons is a big family. I say yes, I have grandpas live near ours. I often go to their house to eat lunch o dinner. On the side, we have a party a week with total members of family. I like this party, it can increase our relationship. I am proud of I have this family.
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I have a big family. I live with my father and my mother. I think someone has a question in the mind which only three persons is a big family. I say yes, I have grandpas who live near ours us. I often go to their house to eat lunch or dinner. On the side, we have a party a every week with total all the members of the family. I like this party, it can increase improve our relationship. I am proud of I have this my family.
Very, very good.
"I think someone has a question in the mind which only three persons is a big family."
This sentence is a little unclear.
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