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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 4

Describing Objects, Animals, and People

Instructions: Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

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My dog is small and his hair color is brown! he likes to sleep on the couch! In my house there are two large windows and I like a lot because there is light until late afternoon! This day has been very long and exciting!
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  • Tom Milliner
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    He likes to sleep on the couch! In my house there are two large windows which I like a lot because there is light until late afternoon.   (use periods more and ! less) This day has been very long and exciting!

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