Going on Vacation
Instructions:
Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1
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In this year I was on vacation in July. I spent it in Crimea. I was in Gurzuf, Yalta, and Aluşta. I swimed in Black Sea and saw many sights of Crimea. In September, I am going to go in Turkey for one week.
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This year I was...
I swam in the Black Sea and saw the many...
In September I am going to Turkey.....
It was O.K. but for those who are not familiar with Ukraine geography......I looked up Gurzuf and Yalta and discovered the they are by the Black Sea. Very nice.
This year, I was on vacation in July. I spent it in Crimea. I was in Gurzuf, Yalta, and Aluşta. I swam in the Black Sea and saw many sights of the Crimea. In September, I am going to go to Turkey for one week.
A very good effort, Serg. Well done!
I am going swimming. I went swimming. I swam in the sea.
Good job Serge, you can either say that you saw the many sights of Crimea or you saw many sights of the Crimea. Either one is acceptable.
In This year I was went on vacation in July. I spent it in Crimea. I was in Gurzuf, Yalta, and Aluşta. I swam swimed in the Black Sea and saw many sights of the Crimea. In September, I am going to go in to Turkey for one week.
Nice work!
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