When and where?
Instructions:
Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 4
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A mulher vai trabalhar as sete horas.
woman will work seven hours.
O menino vai á lanchonete as onze horas.
the boy goes to eleven o'clock snack.
A menina vai ao parque as tres horas.
girl go to the park three hours.
Voce vai na minha casa as dez horas.
you will in my house at ten o'clock.
O homem vai a biblioteca as oito horas.
The man goes to the library eight hours.
Eu vou as duas horas para a praia.
I'm going to two hours to the beach.
woman will work seven hours.
O menino vai á lanchonete as onze horas.
the boy goes to eleven o'clock snack.
A menina vai ao parque as tres horas.
girl go to the park three hours.
Voce vai na minha casa as dez horas.
you will in my house at ten o'clock.
O homem vai a biblioteca as oito horas.
The man goes to the library eight hours.
Eu vou as duas horas para a praia.
I'm going to two hours to the beach.
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The woman will work at seven.The boy goes to the snack bar at eleven. The girl goes to the park at three. You will go to my house at ten o'clock. The man goes to the library at eight hours. I'm going at two to the beach.
Vanessa: cuidado pois da maneira como você escreveu parece que o tempo é de continuidade (a mulher ficou sete horas no trabalho, a menina ficou três horas no parque)... use o "at" que daí fica mais fácil de entender que vc se refere ao horário, e não ao tempo naquela atividade ;-)
Good try Vanessa,
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Cheers
Eliz