Login with Facebook
Forgot your password? I do not have an account
Your information will be remembered for 2 weeks only.

English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

Gabriela S.'s submission: Average Rating:
My mother is a nurse, she is not a doctor. My dad is from merchant navy, he is not a mechanic. I am in the university studying journalism.
Submitted over a year ago

Please Login to Review this Submission

Login



Reviews

  • carl
    Mochapoints: 134370  |  Teacher Score: 126929 (100%)

    very well done, you are doing very well

    Submitted over a year ago
    Spelling:
    Proficiency:
    Grammar:
    Translate
  • Debbie (=
    Mochapoints: 6773  |  Teacher Score: 3697 (100%)

    My mother is a nurse; she is not a doctor. My dad is from the merchant navy; he is not a mechanic. I am in the university studying journalism.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • summerguy2007
    Mochapoints: 71867  |  Teacher Score: 59141 (99%)

    I am at the university 

    Very good!

     

    Submitted over a year ago
    Spelling:
    Proficiency:
    Grammar:
  • LangLearnerVI
    Mochapoints: 30671  |  Teacher Score: 18181 (100%)

    Fine... just need to take "the" from before university..

    Muito bom!

    Submitted over a year ago
    Spelling:
    Proficiency:
    Grammar:
  • sinbad44
    Mochapoints: 4496  |  Teacher Score: 3349 (100%)

    great work but here is a better way to write some of it ok

    My mother is a nurse, she is not a doctor. My dad is in the merchant marines, he is not a mechanic. I am in university studying journalism.

    I hope this helps you some. beijos sweetheart

    Submitted over a year ago
    Spelling:
    Proficiency:
    Grammar:

Tips for Good Reviews:

Be Specific
  • Give useful suggestions and examples.
  • Write more than just brief comments like “Good job” or “Needs work".
Make Corrections
  • Use the editing features to apply strikethrough, bold or different font colors.
  • Use the virtual keyboard to insert special characters in your reviews.
Teach by Example
  • Review a speaking exercise by recording your own audio comment.
  • Focus on correct pronunciation and speaking patterns.