Describing Objects
Instructions:
Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1
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Well, i will try to describe my room. There are some purses on the bed. There is a lamp on the PC table. There are a lot of books in the dresser. The are cards in my wallet. My sister is at the door call me for the dinner.
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very good, only a couple errors:
The There are cards in my wallet. My sister is at the door calling call me for the dinner.
Well, i I ("I" should always be capitalized in proper English) will try to describe my room. There are some purses on the bed. There is a lamp on the PC table. There are a lot of books in on the dresser(are the books in the dresser or on top of the dresser?). There are cards in my wallet. My sister is at the door calling me for the dinner.
Same comments as above
Very good.
Well, I will .....
My sister is at the door calling me for dinner.
Great job. THERE are cards in my wallet. My sister is at the door CALLING me for dinner.
I think your English skills are really becoming stronger. I hope you have some English speakers that you can practice with.
here is my corrections ok
Well, i will try to describe my room. There are some purses on the bed. There is a lamp on the PC table. There are a lot of books on the dresser. There are cards in my wallet. My sister is at the door calling me for dinner.
many sweet kisses for you. I hope I can help