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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

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I am a man, I am not short, I am young.
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  • Erik.
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    Great job, this is well done! However, it would seem to me a bit short. Keep working, trying to build your vocabulary and put it into your exercises !
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  • JUNIOR CONTROLL...
    Mochapoints: 43917  |  Teacher Score: 35844 (98%)
    Hello Jowpas! I was assigned to correct their sentences. Pay attention, please! I am a man. I am not a woman. I am not short and old. I am tall and young. Other examples of phrases from my own. The woman is thin and young. The man is tall and rich. The boy is short and young. The girl is short and young. You are short and fat. I am thin and young. She is not a man. She is a woman. He is not poor. He is rich. The boy is not tall. The boy is short. The girl is not old. The girl is young. You are not young. You are old. I am not short. I am tall. The woman is beautiful and the man is handsome. Good bye! Add me in your list of friends, please!
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  • sutch
    Mochapoints: 7438  |  Teacher Score: 6847 (100%)
    I am a man. I am not short. I am young. Also describe "a woman", "a boy", "a girl", and "you".
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  • Lior
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    lol The woman is rich, she is not poor. The man is not short, he is tall. The boy is short, he is not tall. The girl is not fat, she is thin. I am a man, I am not woman. You are not fat, you are thin.
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  • chengxuan
    Mochapoints: 302  |  Teacher Score: 51 (100%)

    The last edit was very good. Keep up the hard work and dedication.
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  • Michael
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    Hey, I am your new Chinese friend.  I am a man too. I am not short too. And I am young too! Nice to meet you! Have fun!
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  • Ryan Smith
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    I am a man. I am not short. I am young.

    Good!
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