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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

marta maria sil...'s submission: Average Rating:
My last vacation was in Gramado, RS, Brasil. I went with my family and some friends. There was very cold. There was fog clouds up to the mountains. We visited some historic places there. I recommend these places for anyone wants to visit Brasil.
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  • Chris
    Mochapoints: 61687  |  Teacher Score: 41169 (100%)

    It was very cold.

    I recommend these places for (to) anyone who wants to visit Brazil.

    Very few errors. Muito bom!
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Ozmund
    Mochapoints: 158872  |  Teacher Score: 81330 (100%)

    Very good Marta!  "IT was very cold.  There WERE fog clouds (clouds of fog) ON TOP of the mountains."  "WHO wants to visit."  Continue!
    Submitted over a year ago
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