Describing Hairstyles
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4
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The woman dose not have red hair. She has a brown hair.
The man dose not have beard. He has a white moustache.
The girl dose not have straight hair. She has curly hair.
The boy dose not have long hair. He has short hair.
I do not have a white moustache. I have a black moustache.
You do not have a gray beard. You have a black beard.
The man dose not have beard. He has a white moustache.
The girl dose not have straight hair. She has curly hair.
The boy dose not have long hair. He has short hair.
I do not have a white moustache. I have a black moustache.
You do not have a gray beard. You have a black beard.
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She has a brown hair. and everytime that you wrote dose you supposed to write does.
other than that, good job.
The woman does not have red hair. She has a brown hair
The woman does not have red hair. She has a brown hair. The man does not have a beard. He has a white moustache. The girl does not have straight hair. She has curly hair. The boy does not have long hair. He has short hair. I do not have a white moustache. I have a black moustache. You do not have a gray beard. You have a black beard.
Hi Saeed,
The woman does not have red hair. She has a brown hair. The man does not have a beard. He has a white moustache. The girl does not have straight hair. She has curly hair. The boy does not have long hair. He has short hair. I do not have a white moustache. I have a black moustache. You do not have a gray beard. You have a black beard.
Thanks all my Friends.
Very good writing exercise, Saeed. My suggestions are: The woman dose does not have red hair. She has a brown hair. The man dose does not have beard. He has a white moustache. The girl dose does not have straight hair. She has curly hair. The boy dose does not have long hair. He has short hair. I do not have a white moustache. I have a black moustache. You do not have a gray beard. You have a black beard.