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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

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The woman is fat. The man is tall. The boy is not short. The girl is young. You are not a woman. She is a man. I am poor.
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  • Juan Denis Alva...
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    Good job! Congratulations.

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  • surrra
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    very good!

    the only thing I can think of is the sentense "she is a man", which is grammtically correct, but can sound funny :D

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  • dr. Hannibal Le...
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    Haha! "She is a man" is the best :)

    很好!:)

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  • Apple
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    Hi 雨中燕

    Lets practise :

    >>She is a woman          是个女人

    >>He is a man                他是个男人

    >>"She" is a man           是个男人

    You need to put "   " inverted commas for "she" in  that sentence.

    cheers

    Apple

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