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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4

Describe an area in your city

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

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I have blond hair. My hair is long. My eyes are blue colour. I'm not very tall and I have light skin. Of course, I don`t have any facial hair:)
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  • Michael-Todd
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    "My eyes are blue."  You don't need to say "colour" here.  :)  How tall are you?  

     

    Oh god, a fish with facial hair.  XD  Hilarious thought.  Nobody on here ask what the fish thing is about.

     

    Anyway, good job!  Keep it up!

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  • ahmed
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    Great work

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  • alan kaplan
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    Good work. You don't need to use the word colour but if you do, the British way to spell this is colour, and the USA way to spell this is color. In the USA we don't pay to much attention to the British way.

    I have blond hair. My hair is long. My eyes are blue colour. I'm not very tall and I have light skin. Of course, I don`t have any facial hair:)

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  • Ken Sutton
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    I have blonde hair.  My hair is long.  My eyes are the color blue.  I'm not very tall.  I have light skin.  Of course, I don't have any facial hair.   ^_^

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  • Sandy
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    1) I have blonde hair. My hair is long I have long blonde hair - 8/10

    2) I'm not very tall and I have light skin - 10.10

    3) Of course I dont have any facial hair - 10/10

    Not bad :-)

     

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  • tylerdurden
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    It should be blonde cause of you are a girl.No need colour after blue.

    Not bad,keep studying :)

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  • ceXhc
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    I have blonde hair. My hair is long. My eyes are blue colour. I'm not very tall, and I have light skin. Of course I don't have any facial hair. :)

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  • ansgar74
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    good job )

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