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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5

How many objects?

Instructions: Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

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She has got four candles and five plates. If she broken two plates, she was not use a candle. So she must be carefull.. Her brother has got ten ball. He wanna give two ball to his big brother.. But He does not want to ball.. He want to a computer..
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  • Анечка
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  • Amy
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    she was not using a candle when she broke two plates. Her brother has got ten balls. He wanna give two balls to his big brother. But He does not want balls.. He wants a computer..

    be careful about the grammar. good luck:)

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  • Thrudastorm
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    She has got four candles and five plates. If she broken two plates, she was not using a candle. So she must be careful.. Her brother has got ten balls. He wanna wants to give two ball to his big brother, but he does not want to a ball. He wants to a computer..

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Thrudastorm
    Mochapoints: 5270  |  Teacher Score: 2096 (0%)

    She has got four candles and five plates. If she broken two plates, she was not using a candle. So she must be careful.. Her brother has got ten balls. He wanna wants to give two balls to his big brother, but he does not want to a ball. He wants to a computer..

    Submitted over a year ago

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