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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

André 健二 岩野's submission: Average Rating:
The woman is on the table, because the chair is the small, She is trying change the lamp.
The man is in the car, becaus he goes to the job.
the flowers is in the box and on the table.
the money is in my wallet and the candy is in my pocket.
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  • britneybabi81
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    The word "because" is spelled wrong in the second sentence. Also I would work on the grammar, the content is there however you need to fix up the grammar a little bit and it would work very well!

    Keep up the good work!

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