Going on Vacation
Instructions:
Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1
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This year I have no holiday. I have stay home and work. No sea, nor mountains but a lot of to do! It's cruel life!
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Very good. Please see below :
" This year I will not be having a vacation. I have stay home and work. No sea nor mountains but a lot of work to do. It is a cruel life for some!"
Very interestingly phrased. Keep it up.
Good. You call also say 'No sea or mountains' unless you deliberately indeeded to be poetic.
A lot of work to do is equivalent to a lot to do - but your construction is more native.
Many thanks!
"I have to stay at home and work."
Otherwise, a good job! :-) Keep it up!!