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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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He is a doctor, not teacher. I am an engineer, not worker. You are a mechanic. She is a nurse, not secretary. He is not a bus driver, he is a police officer. You are a manager. I am not student, I am a teacher.
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  • luseen
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    good

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  • pattyfan
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    He is a doctor, not a teacher. I am an engineer, not aworker. You are a mechanic. She is a nurse, not a secretary. He is not a bus driver He is a police officer. You are a manager. I am not a student I am a teacher. Great work!  Kevin
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  • MinusNick
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    What Pattyfan said: don't forget the "a."

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  • delia amadei
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    Very good! I agree with the others users.

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  • delia amadei
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    Sorry,I made a mistake:the other users.

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