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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

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I went to Sanya Hainan last vacation.Sanya is a beautiful place for a visitor especially for those who have never been to the sea.I like the sea in Sanya and I think you will like it too if you go there.
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  • Odd
    Mochapoints: 3123  |  Teacher Score: 878 (100%)

    Great job.  Just make sure to use two spaces after periods.

    "..who have never been to the sea.  I like..."

    Submitted over a year ago
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