Describing the weather
Instructions:
Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3
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The woman is wearing sunglasses becouse today is sunny. It is rain so man has umbrella. Girls are swimming in the sea becouse it is hot.
Boys are wearing warm hats becouse it is cold and snowing.
Boys are wearing warm hats becouse it is cold and snowing.
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The woman is wearing sunglasses, because today it is sunny. It is rainy, so the man has an umbrella. Girls are swimming in the sea, because it is hot. Boys are wearing warm hats, because it is cold and snowing.
Good effort!!
IMPROVED: The woman is wearing sunglasses because today is sunny. It is rainy/ing so the man has an umbrella. Girls are swimming in the sea because it is hot. Boys are wearing warm hats because it is cold and snowing.
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