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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 3

My occupation

Instructions: Using the vocabulary from this lesson, please describe your occupation. What do you do? Do you like what you do? How long have you been working in this field? Did you always want to be in this occupation?

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Here I want to say something about the the Dragon Boat festival in china.the Dragon Boat festival is on 5,May.On that day we can see the beautiful Dragon boat in the river.I only last one day.
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  • mscarms
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    Please allow me to rewrite your same response with corrections. Please notice where I have used capital letters.

    Here, I want to say something about the Dragon Boat Festival in China. It is an annual festival that is held on May 5th. On that day, we can see the Dragon Boat in the river. The festival only lasts for one day.
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  • Malena (Manami)
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    very good!!!

    and I need your help me learn the Chinese language please!!!!
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