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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 2

Running Errands

Instructions: Write about a set of errands you have to do. Where do you need to go? When? With who?

Natasha's submission: Average Rating:
I work at a Hospital as a lawer and an engeneer.
Tomorrow I'll do some paper work. I don't need to go anywhere tomorrow.
Next week I should go to The Court to Moscow. I'm going to go there by car.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Jet
    Mochapoints: 35050  |  Teacher Score: 19060 (100%)

    I work at a hospital as a lawyer and an engineer. Tomorrow I'll do some paper work. I don't need to go anywhere tomorrow. Next week I should go to The Court in Moscow. I'm going to go there by car.

    "The Court" - that's correct if it is the title of the court, otherwise, and most likely, it should not have capitals, ie. I should go to the court..

    "I'm going to go there by car" is ok, "I will (or I'll) go there by car" sounds more natural.

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  • Tony
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    Well, Jet said everything that should be said...

    Great work!!!!

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  • Fillmore
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    A couple of small mistakes.  

    hospital; lawyer; engineer.

    There's no need to write 'The' before court.

    'I'm going by car' is adequate in this sentence.

    Well done Natasha.

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