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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

Jenny's submission: Average Rating:
My last vacation was quite good though my family didn't go to our province. We just had our family outing and Church outing. We went to Tagaytay for 2days and 1day in Batangas. It was fun. I enjoyed it.
I recommend Puerto Galera. Puerto Galera is one of the famous vacation places especially for the foreigners. I haven't been there but I know that it's a great place.
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  • ds
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    Mochapoints: 2402  |  Teacher Score: 595 (100%)
    Should be: My last vacation was quite good although my family didn't go to our province. We just had our family outing and Church outing. We went to Tagaytay for 2 days and 1 day in Batangas. It was fun. I enjoyed it. I recommend Puerto Galera. Puerto Galera is one of the famous vacation places especially for foreigners. I haven't been there but I know that it's a great place.
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  • Jenny
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    Thanks ds. :)
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