When and where?
Instructions:
Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 4
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On 5 August 2009. I and my friends went to Na-rai hotel for learning about western culture.
We go by VIP bus and arrived at Na-rai hotel on 10.30 o’clock. Na-rai Hotel is a Beautiful hotel in my sight. We Study about Western Culture at hall and go to see the other part of hotel like kitchen, Main Hall, Room for any class tourist and toilet.
At last we back at Hall and eat Lunch. Salad is a first dish. It ok but it little bitter. Next one is corn Soup and main dish is fish steak with butter rice. And end with custard and warm chocolate milk. We finish our Lunch and ready for go back to school. I brought some cake from Na-rai Bakery for my parents.
We go by VIP bus and arrived at Na-rai hotel on 10.30 o’clock. Na-rai Hotel is a Beautiful hotel in my sight. We Study about Western Culture at hall and go to see the other part of hotel like kitchen, Main Hall, Room for any class tourist and toilet.
At last we back at Hall and eat Lunch. Salad is a first dish. It ok but it little bitter. Next one is corn Soup and main dish is fish steak with butter rice. And end with custard and warm chocolate milk. We finish our Lunch and ready for go back to school. I brought some cake from Na-rai Bakery for my parents.
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Excellent spelling..perhaps a little work need with the smaller details..for example "the" "is" "at" "go" For example: We study about western culture at the Hall. We finish our lunch and are ready...
It is however very understandable.
Well done keep up the good work.
good job.only a little work need to pay more attention. Past Tense used in here.
We went by VIP bus... We studyed about Western Culture at the Hall and...At last we went back to the Hall and had Lunch.Salad was the first dish. It was ok but it was a little bitter. Next one was corn soup and main dish was fish steak with butter rice.We finished our Lunch and readyed...