Describing the weather
Instructions:
Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3
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Yesterday was cold so I han to use a big jacket. Today is warm so she does not need an umbrella. The day before yesterday was hot and sunny so I had to wear sunglasses. That man does not need a scarf because it´s really sunny.
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Yesterday was cold so I han had to use a big jacket.
you could also say
Yesterday was cold so I wore a big jacket.
Today is warm so she I does not need an umbrella.
(I in order to keep the paragraph consistent)
Yesterday was cold so I had to wear_ a {thick # big} jacket. Today is warm so she does not need an umbrella. The day before yesterday was hot and sunny so I had to wear sunglasses. That man does not need a scarf,_* because it's (apóstrofo, no acento agudo) really sunny.
*coma!
(He does not need heat because he is cold, (sino) but because he is wet!) (coma-ES = comma-GB+USA)