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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 3

Describe your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from the lessons, describe your trip to work or school. How long does it take to get there? How far do you have to go? How much does it cost?

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We are four mambers is my family : mother , father , me and my brother... I have a brother he is younger than me... I'm the oldiest child.
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  • **Ajou**
    Mochapoints: 198111  |  Teacher Score: 169887 (74%)

    There are four mambers is my family, my mother, father, brother and me.  I have a brother. He is younger than me. I'm the oldiest child.

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  • ALexsa
    Mochapoints: 14051  |  Teacher Score: 821 (88%)

    thanks

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  • leader
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    We are four mambers is in my family: mother, father, me and my brother. I have a brother he who is younger than me. I'm the oldiest child.

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    Mochapoints: 17722  |  Teacher Score: 16986 (97%)

    We are four mambers is in my family: mother, father, me and my brother. I have a brother he who is younger than me. I'm the oldiest child.

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  • Apple
    Mochapoints: 55615  |  Teacher Score: 48185 (100%)

    There are four members in my family: my parents, a younger brother and I.

    I am the older child. < write like this if you are comparing between yourself and your younger brother. (Comparison between 2 objects)

    eg: I am the taller girl. She is the smarter girl. That is the richer man. You are the younger boy in the family.

     I am the oldest child < write like this if you are comparing with more than one other person. (comparing with more than one object)

    eg. I am the shortest girl in class. You are the poorest man in the village. They are the luckiest students in that fully sponsored school.

    Hope this helps. Have fun practising :)

    cheers

    Apple

    ps. There is no such word as oldiest under the American or British English system.

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