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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 2

Describing Objects and their Locations

Instructions: Describe the locations of a set of people and objects. Describe each. EX. The woman is on the yellow couch. She is not in the brown chair.

André 健二 岩野's submission: Average Rating:
Where is she? Who? That woman who was in the red chair.
I think that she already go out.
Where is it my money that it was on the table? It is in my wallet.


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  • derekkoch
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    Where is she? Who? That woman who was in the red chair. I think that she already went out. Where is it my money that it was on the table? It is in my wallet.

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  • natalia
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    Where are  my money what were on the table? They are in my wallet.

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  • Callie
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    Hi there,

    Great start.  Just a couple of grammatical errors which can easily be sorted out.

    go out = replace with .... she HAS already GONE out.

    Where IS (remove it) my money that (remove it) was on the table.

    I hope that helps,

    Cheers,

    Callie

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