What are people doing?
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary from this lesson, describe the activities that six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and I. EX. The postman often pushes a cart in the morning.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 5
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I am in the supermarket. There are a lot of people in here. The bald man is pushing the cart to his black car. His daughter is siiting in the cart with purchases and groceries. A cowd of girls are crowding into the supermarket. The woman is leaning on the information desk. The young boy is carring his heavy backpack.He is standing near the bookstand. The security guard is speaking on his handie-talkie. The girl is eating fried chicken at KFC. I am in the line in front of the place of payment.
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I am in the supermarket. There are a lot of people in here. The bald man is pushing the cart to his black car. His daughter is siiting in the cart with purchases and groceries. A crowd of girls are crowding into the supermarket. The woman is leaning on the information desk. The young boy is carrying his heavy backpack.He is standing near the bookstand. The security guard is speaking on his handie-talkie walkie-talkie/radio. The girl is eating fried chicken at KFC. I am in the line in front of the place of payment cashier.
This is great. In the US a handie-talkie is called a walkie-talkie (spelling might not be right!) A place of payment is called a cashier in a supermarket. There is an extra 'i' in sitting. You missed an 'r' in the crowd of girls. All stuff bought in a supermarket is usually referred to as groceries whether it is food or things like soap or magazines. In English writing two spaces come after a period. These are minor things and some you would only know if you lived here, like what a cashier is. You are doing very well. Keep it up! And get some chicken at the KFC if there is one in Vietnam. It is good!
The young boy is carrying .... The security guard is speaking on his walkie-talkie. ... I am in line in front of the cashier.
Spelling needs some work: "carring" should be "carrying".
This is very good work.