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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 4

Describe your best friend

Instructions: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.

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There are many,many kind a beautiful meals in my land....they various from sea's food and land's food. The cousine of my land is mainly,a poor cousine.
But at the same time, it is very much delicius and saporite. Then I haven't a favorite meal because I like, I love every meals of my Land.
And above all, above everything I love the fruits of my land, that it is SWEET,SCENTED,RICH OF COLOURS.
Like a white bunch of grapes; yellow,white and red melons; sweetest figs and prickly pear, and after oranges and Clementine mandarins.
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  • JustinTexas
    Mochapoints: 928  |  Teacher Score: 208 (0%)

    There are many, many kind a of beautiful meals in my land....tThey various vary from sea's food seafood and land's food. The cousine cuisine of my land is mainly,a poor cousine cuisine,  Bbut at the same time, it is very much delicious and saporite(<-what is this word?). Then I haven't I don't have a favorite meal because I like, I love every meals of my Land. And above all, above everything, I love the fruits (fruit can be plural without the "s") of my land, :that it is SWEET,SCENTED,and RICH OF IN COLOURS COLOR. Like a white bunch of grapes; yellow,white, and red melons; sweetest figs and prickly pear, and after afterward, oranges and Clementine mandarins

    Hope this helps!

    Keep up the good work.

    Justin from Texas

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  • Tanita
    Mochapoints: 10917  |  Teacher Score: 1401 (100%)

    There are many,many kind a beautiful meals in my province/town/country.They vary from sea food to meet and others. The cousine of my land is mainlya poor, simple cousine. But at the same time, it is very much delicius and full of flavour.  I haven't got a favorite meal because I  I love every meal of myprovince/town/country . And above everything else I love the fruit which is sweet, scented and rich in colour. For example: white grapes; yellow,white and red melons; sweet figs and prickly pears, and lastly oranges and clementine mandarins.

     

    Bravo Gianni! quanto ti piace mangiare?!

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  • Tanita
    Mochapoints: 10917  |  Teacher Score: 1401 (100%)

    There are many, many kind a beautiful meals in my province/town/country.

    sorry this part is wrong!!!!!

    There are many, many kinds of wonderful/great/delicious meals in my province/town/country.

     

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  • What\'s in a na...
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    good!!

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  • rebeka
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    Good!

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