Describe an area in your city
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4
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Hello Dear friend Elena. Dont worry. I will describe myself again. As you know, my color hair is black. Do you forgot it? Remember, it is short. About my color eyes, it is brown. I dont have any facial hair. I am tall and thin. By the way, I am wearing a white T-shirt in the profile´s picture. I wish I could visit Montreal and talk you face to face. Could you describe yourself?
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Don't worry. As you know, my hair colour (AmE color)is black.
Have you forgotten?
About the color of my eyes, they are brown.
I don't have ...
... and talk to you face to face.
Hello dear friend Elena. Don't worry. I will describe myself again. As you know, my hair color is black. Did you forget? Remember, it is short. As for the color of my eyes, they are brown. I don't have any facial hair. I am tall and thin. By the way, I am wearing a white T-shirt in my profile's picture. I wish I could visit Montreal and talk to you face to face. Could you describe yourself?
Well done! :)
MY HAIR COLOR, my eyes color
DID YOU FORGET IT? - NO, I DID NOT!!!
...and talk TO you...
Dear friend Jovani, I don't worry, because I know I have such a good friend! I wish you could visit Montreal or I could visit Rio de Janeiro and talk to you face to face, and I believe that one day it will happen!
My hair color is dark brown, my eyes are green, I am short and I am not thin! I am wearing an evening gown in my profile picture, because this picture was taken at the wedding. I am wearing dance shoes with high heels.I don't have any facial hair, either! And now tell me how your week has been.
Regards,
Elena
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Good job, Jovani! I have nothing to add to what your friends noted above. Keep it up! Good luck!
HELLO MY DEAR FRIEND THE ONLY MISTAKE YOU MADE IS THAT YOU WROTE ,AND TALK TO YOU FACE TO FACE,CONGRATULATIONS POLA AND FAMILY ,,,,WELLLL KEEP IN TOUCH,YES I COULD DESCRIBE MYSELF SHORT AND FUNNY AND LOVE PEOPLE ,,,,,,,,
Attencion !!! Very good!!!