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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 3

What are people doing?

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. I am eating food at the table. I am not sleeping in bed.

André 健二 岩野's submission: Average Rating:
I am at the table in the burgerking and I am eating a junk food. I know that this is the worst food for health, but I like it.
He was running because the dog was following hin.
She used to drank milk but now she alone drink water.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Candy Donovan
    Mochapoints: 3197  |  Teacher Score: 472 (100%)

    Dear André,

    Your exercise is very good. Please see the correct grammer below:

    I am at the table in Burger King and I am eating junk food. I know this is the worst food for my health, but I like it.

    He was running because the dog was following him.

    She used to drink milk but now she only drinks water.

    I hope this is helpful

    Muito bem!

    Candy

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • 爱你;永远
    Mochapoints: 163  |  Teacher Score: 32 (0%)

    很好的,继续努力,我教你简体中文,你教我你们的语言可以吗,希望我们可以成为朋友

    Submitted over a year ago

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