Going Shopping
Instructions:
Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4
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Two weeks ago my father asked to buy a fumigator. He hoped, it would help him in his cruel fight with mosquitos. I bought one, but dad forgot to turn off the fumigator, and it got out of order. Next night I found out, that my poor father used an overdue antimosquito cream (the instruction said, it was perfect for use into the wild). And I bought new fumigator in the small shop, which has opend in the next house couple days ago. And now I'm waiting for tne next broken fumigator.
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Two weeks ago my father asked me to buy a fumigator. He hoped, it would help him in his cruel fight with mosquitos. I bought one, but dad forgot to turn off the fumigator, and it got out of order. The next night I found out, that my poor father used an overdue (?) antimosquito cream (the instructions said, it was perfect for use into the wild). And I bought new fumigator in the small shop, which has opened in the next house a couple of days ago. And now I'm waiting for tne next broken fumigator.
Very creative and amusing, with only a few minor errors. I am, however, unsure what you meant by "overdue."