Describe your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from the lessons, describe your trip to work or school. How long does it take to get there? How far do you have to go? How much does it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 3
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Well...my daily journey starts at 6.30 in the morning when i wake up have breackfast and leave home for work. I need like 1 hour and 30 minutes to arrive. Once i'm there i take my coffe and start reading the poste, if newù letters arrive or if someone send faxes. The first thing i see are the post-its my boss let me on my desk. Then i start making calls, write e-mail, make new offers for my clients. It is a nice and quiet place. I would have some 2-3 bad things to say about it but i prefer not too. Then at 13.00 or 13.30 i have mu lunch breack (when i eat or do an english exercice like i am right now:)). At 18.00 I finish my work, sometimes maybe later and back home another 1hour and 30 minutes. Thank you all for the corrections :)
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Let's say I am so lucky to have a family like mine. I'm the only kid. I have no brothers or sisters, but I have many of cousins and relatives. The person I love the most within my family are my older uncle, my mom and my younger younger. He has two children, Andrea and Ionut :). I learned one important thing during all the years that have passed: to accept our family the way it is, to value and love it. Family is the one precious institution we all should all belong to.
Let's say I am so lucky to have a family like mine. I'm an the only child. I have no brothers or sisters, but I have a lots of cousins and relatives. The most I love my uncle most, my mom's younger brother. He has two children, Andrea and Ionut :). I learned one important thing during all of these years: to accept our family as the way it is, to treasure and love it. Family is the one precious thing that we all should have.
good work :)
Salve Mirea, you're perfect just keep practising!
Let's say I am so lucky to have a family like mine. I'm an the only child. I have no brothers or sisters, but I have a lots of cousins and relatives. The most I mostly love my uncle, my mom and younger brother. He has two children, Andrea and Ionut :). I learned one important thing during all this these years, to accept our family the way it is, to treasure ("value" fits better here) and love it. Family is the one precious thing one of the precious things that we all should have.
Ciao!
The persons I .......
....many cousins and relatives
and my younger uncle
good
GELINCIK & AVIATOR gave you the right correction, you are doing good.
good luck
i am the only child.
the person i like most is my uncle, my mother's younger brother
all these years.
Bonjour Mirela :-)
All corrections have been made!
Nothing has been left for me!
My best and sweetest wishes for your future!
i have nothing to add
gooood luuuuck
gooooooooooooo mirela
I learned one important thing during all these years; to accept our family the way it is
Very Good!
Beautifully written