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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

ela's submission: Average Rating:
the woman is old and tall
the girl is young nad pretty
the boy is fat and he look like an old man
a man is hunk and young
you and i are friends and relatives
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Vishakha
    Mochapoints: 15943  |  Teacher Score: 1632 (100%)

    the The woman is old and tall. the The girl is young nad and pretty. the The boy is fat and but he look looks like an old man. The man is hunk and young. You and i I are friends and relatives.

    Hello Ela,

    After every sentence put full stop. and begin the new sentence with capital letter.

    I should be always written in capital.

    Good.........

     

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  • LNN
    Mochapoints: 2378  |  Teacher Score: 372 (0%)

    In addition to what Vishakha has written:

    The man is a hunk and is young.

    :)

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Frank/Franco
    Mochapoints: 15581  |  Teacher Score: 15198 (99%)

    The woman is old and tall.

    The girl is young and pretty.

    The boy is fat and he looks like an old man.

    The man is a hunk and young.

    You and I are friends and relatives.

     

    'I' (=me) is ALWAYS written in CAPITAL.

    Sentences MUST start with a CAPITAL and must END with a 'full stop': (.).

    Verb: 'to look': 'look - looked - looked'. Compare with: 'to see': 'see - saw - seen.'

    'I, you, we, they 'look', but: He, she, it 'looks'.

    Capish?

    Must be careful and type 'and', not 'nad'.

    It is a good effort: pay attention and you will learn a lot!

    Frank

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