Describing Objects, Animals, and People
Instructions:
Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 4
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An elephant is heavy and dirty.
The people are setting.
The desk on the leth a chair.
Someone is shoes clean.
The big dog and small cat setting.
The people are setting.
The desk on the leth a chair.
Someone is shoes clean.
The big dog and small cat setting.
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The (elephant is old and heavy and/old, heavy elephant) is sitting in a (clean? what is a clean?). There are small fishes. A small dog and a big dog are eating. The man is (wearing?) clean shoes. I am small and not heavy. The place is cold. The new car is expensive and the old car is cheap. The food is hot.
Some things made no sense, but overall it was good.
The elephant is old and heavy is sitting in the ground a clean. The fishes are small. A small dog and a big dog are eating. The man is making clean(or cleaning) his shoes (I got what u mean but I dont know the word for it, maybe make it clean). I am small and not heavy. The place is cold. The new car is expensive and the old car is cheap. The food is hot.
The old and heavy elephant is sitting in a clean ______. There are small fishes. A small dog and a big dog are eating. The man is cleaning the shoes. I am small and I am not heavy. The place is cold. The new car is expensive and the old car is cheap. The foods is hot.
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An elephant is heavy and dirty.
The people are sitting. [We use sit and set differently. We sit on a chair, but we set a plate on the table, for example.]
The desk on the leth a chair. [Humm...do you mean "The desk on the left has a chair" or "There is a leather chair at the desk" or what? Sorry.]
Someone is shoes clean. [Let's see. Maybe this should be "Someone is cleaning the shoes" or "Someone is wearing clean shoes."]
The big dog and small cat are sitting.
Que bom! Even without any changes, most people could understand what you mean here, but I have left a few suggestions for you to improve your grammar. I hope I have explained my reasoning well here.
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